Insurance - part 7

(2332 words)

total so far:

13,752 / 50,000

This post is quite late. I've been working on this since I got up about 6am (it's now a bit after 5pm). Amazingly I haven't checked it properly, so I'm posting blind. After yesterday's misgivings about sex scenes I started writing this morning and what do the blasted characters do, but start having sex. I swear I didn't intend for this. It just happened! I left it in because it feels right somehow, but it meant I didn't have time to tighten up what followed, which was the actual reason for the chapter! (Damn characters!). So please forgive me if the second part of this chapter feels a little loose. I'm sure it could do with better descriptions and better handling generally. It'll get fixed in the rewrite. :)

By the way, I realise Sally and Rachel are pretty saccharine lovey-dovey, but believe me, there is a purpose to this.

My average is still a bit low. I need to get it up above 2,000 words per day I think, now that I've dropped two chapters... unless I can expand some of the later stuff. I now have only 26 chapters in all. It is all a bit scary.

Please do let me know what you think. Every bit of feedback helps. If you are following the story please let me know, even if it is to say, "Next chapter please..."

Note that what follows contains adult concepts.
The love of two females for each other is central to this story so if you are offended by that stop reading now.

07 - willpower

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