Insurance - part 10
Thursday, 10 November 2005 02:27 pm
(1910 words)total so far:
18,882 / 50,000
(38%)
Yay!! We are into double digits for instalments.
In the rewrite I'm going to have to break up the talk again. I have a very bad habit of doing that. Blah blah blah. I really hope I'm not boring the hell outa everybody... the two or three people reading, that is. :)
Let me know what you think... errors, comments, badly explained parts, good bits, offers of money and sex.... you know, the usual. :)
Note that what follows contains adult concepts.
The love of two females for each other is central to this story so if you are offended by that stop reading now.