request for advice

During September I've decided to illustrate one of my short stories or the first chapter of one of my novels. You can find them all on my stories webpage.

If you have a preference for any of my stories and would like to see it in graphics please let me know. I am having a hell of a time deciding which one would most benefit from it.

I'm hoping the result will be like a comicbook, though not necessarily quite like the standard format. I'm still working that out too, but given my drawing style (if I have one) I doubt it will look like a normal comicbook; probably more like a heavily illustrated story.

Help me decide which one to illustrate, please.