chapter 2

[miriam_e]

The latest part of my story Selena City is up at
02-Background (2015 words)

Comments

[cranky--crocus.livejournal.com]

I loved the description of the plants. And then there was a really positive part that I quite enjoyed and I thought, "Gee, I can't forget this."

But guess what I did? I'm sorry.

Anyway, I thought the latest installment was really great. I'm enjoying reading it!

Kiwi

[miriam-e.livejournal.com]

Thank you. :)
There's more about the Gardens soon too.

I'll be having some sad and angsty moments in the next several chapters, but I'll try to be balancing that with fairly optimistic stuff too. :)

Hope you are better soon.
And I'd love to read your story sometime too, if I could.

[horned-fate.livejournal.com]

Sad and angsty works too. It can be just as beautiful, sometimes.

I'm feeling a lot better. The rest home from school helped.

This is my NaNoWriMo journal. Don't expect brilliance--I write because I love it, not because I want to produce anything particularly good. =). And I don't edit as I write, so there's plenty wrong with it.

Good luck writing!

Kiwi

[miriam-e.livejournal.com]

Ooooh! I can hardly wait to read it later today.
I wish I could write like that, but I'm afraid I'm too obsessive. It slows me down terribly and feels sometimes like I'm writing in a straightjacket.

Glad you're feeling better.

[cranky--crocus.livejournal.com]

I do sometimes write just to produce good writing, and obsess over every word and way of phrasing things...but it isn't advantageous to my NaNo experience, I've found. Mainly I keep that for short stories and fanfiction, surprisingly. Poems too, of course--every word counts in poetry.

Kiwi