Finally got this chapter done. It was a lot more difficult that is looks. I struggled to find a way to talk about the legal/political stuff without boring the pants off the reader and without doing courtroom scenes (I hate that kind of thing in stories).
This finally marks the end of the introduction. Now we move on to what I consider the main part of the story. I'm a little scared about whether I can tell it properly. I guess I just have to try. :)
As usual:
http://miriam-english.org/stories/prescription/
Let me know what you think, and tell me of any errors you find. Thanks.
This finally marks the end of the introduction. Now we move on to what I consider the main part of the story. I'm a little scared about whether I can tell it properly. I guess I just have to try. :)
As usual:
http://miriam-english.org/stories/prescription/
Let me know what you think, and tell me of any errors you find. Thanks.