chapter 11 - memory
Thursday, 18 November 2010 10:32 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
miriam_eI wish I wouldn't get so befuddled when I write like this. It makes it so hard to work out what I've written.
I'm pretty satisfied with the concept here, but I'm not very happy with the execution. I just ended up with a lot of dialogue. Trouble is, I can't think of any other way I could have done that. Maybe I'll come up with some way during the rewrite.
As usual you can find it at:
http://miriam-english.org/stories/prescription/
Let me know what you think...
I'm pretty satisfied with the concept here, but I'm not very happy with the execution. I just ended up with a lot of dialogue. Trouble is, I can't think of any other way I could have done that. Maybe I'll come up with some way during the rewrite.
As usual you can find it at:
http://miriam-english.org/stories/prescription/
Let me know what you think...