chapter 4

[miriam_e]

The latest part of my Selena City story about a lesbian security worker in a near future where sexuality is not an issue.

part 4 Tourists (1839 words)

Sorry about the late update. Had a bit of difficulty with this one.
Let me know what you think.

Comments

[annie-lyne.livejournal.com]

Nice work! Although you may want to reword the second part to the "contract": "you never gamble in Selena City" vs "you never gamble here", which makes it sound like it's just a ban at one venue.

[miriam-e.livejournal.com]

Thanks. :) I'll fix that.