chapter 4

[miriam_e]

The latest part of my Selena City story about a lesbian security worker in a near future where sexuality is not an issue.

part 4 Tourists (1839 words)

Sorry about the late update. Had a bit of difficulty with this one.
Let me know what you think.

Comments

[beeny89.livejournal.com]

I liked it. keep up the good work =)

[miriam-e.livejournal.com]

Thanks. :)

[miriam-e.livejournal.com]

Just to mention: Latest chapter is finally up at
part 5 Tourists (http://miriam-english.org/stories/selena/05-tourists.html)

Missed a day. Not very happy with this one. It is unbelievably difficult to write day-in-the-life stuff without it degenerating into boring drivel or unlikely crap.

Let me know what you think of it.