chapter 5

[miriam_e]

The latest part of my Selena City story about a lesbian security worker in a near future where sexuality is not an issue.

part 5 Tourists (2254 words)

Sorry about the late update. Missed a day. Not very happy with this one. It is unbelievably difficult to write a day-in-the-life stuff without it degenerating into boring drivel or unlikely crap.

Let me know what you think of it.

Comments

[miriam-e.livejournal.com]

He is based on a real-life person. He was the sweetest, most admirable person I've ever met. Pretty-much everybody he met adored him. He had been brain-damaged at birth, but his mother raised him so well that you couldn't tell until you got to know him and noticed he always asked the same questions and cracked the same jokes. He dressed impeccably and was extremely kind and well mannered.

My girlfriend and I were devastated when his Mum phoned up one day to tell us he'd died during an epileptic seizure.

[cranky--crocus.livejournal.com]

=(. What a beautiful soul. I'm honored to have met his memory, even indirectly. Thank you.

Kiwi

[rpeate.livejournal.com]

Oh, my god!