chapter 5

[miriam_e]

The latest part of my Selena City story about a lesbian security worker in a near future where sexuality is not an issue.

part 5 Tourists (2254 words)

Sorry about the late update. Missed a day. Not very happy with this one. It is unbelievably difficult to write a day-in-the-life stuff without it degenerating into boring drivel or unlikely crap.

Let me know what you think of it.

Comments

[blacks-empire.livejournal.com]

Bravo as usual, Miriam. I loved Colby and saw your explanation of him above. I also have to tell you that I LOVED the way that Adele treated the musician. You know, I think that if more of them got the "regular people" treatment, they would be a lot less fun to photograph and such.

It will be very nice to see which direction Adele's life takes her now.

~K

[miriam-e.livejournal.com]

:) Thank you.

Just a little bit more a-day-in-the-life stuff then back to the main story.

I'm a bit worried about the part I'm writing today. I'd mapped it out weeks ago and it is a bit controversial and no matter what I do it seems to be coming out... wrong.
Oh well... we'll see.

[rpeate.livejournal.com]

Nice icon!