chapter 9

[miriam_e]

The latest part of my Selena City story about Adele, a lesbian in a near future where sexuality is not an issue.

part 9 Chances (1653 words)

A bit shorter than I'd like, but starting to get a little more back on track. I don't want to fall into the trap of posting each second day. Though 4am doesn't really count as part of the previous day. :) Hopefully I can get the next part out later today.

Let me know what you think of it.

Comments

[miriam-e.livejournal.com]

Eeek! Thanks for noting the Rani thing.

She was originally to be in one of the earlier chapters that I rewote a number of times and finally gave up on. I just couldn't make the bridge between Adele thinking about Brenda and Adele thinking about Rani. The thing about Rani having the hots for Brenda came from a friend who suggested it as a way to bridge between the two, but I still couldn't get it to work. I'll have to explain more about Rani in a later chapter. She isn't terribly important to the plot, but she does have a few thing to say that I want the story to put out there.

I'm grateful to you for noticing and mentioning it. Thanks Annie.

[annie-lyne.livejournal.com]

Hey, it's nothing. You can still have it work by bringing her in later. :)