chapter 10

[miriam_e]

The latest part of my Selena City story about Adele, a lesbian in a near future where sexuality is not an issue.

Warning for those who are uncomfortable with sexuality. Today's chapter gets just a tiny bit steamy.

part 10 Remember (2039 words)

Took me a while. Sorry folks. I think I'm back into it now. This chapter was going to be more about Brenda teaching at school, but I had problems bridging into it so I moved up something that was originally going to happen later. Hope it works okay.

Let me know what you think of it.

Comments

[gothxxangel.livejournal.com]

Very nice! Marcus is an interesting character. I'm wondering what's going to come out of his introduction. And the little bit of steaminess is very well done. *gets nosebleed* David and his bad timing! Ooh...

[miriam-e.livejournal.com]

heheheh :)

I hope I get Marcus written properly. It is going to be a bit of a challenge to do properly. After writing the bit about Brenda being asleep and my rationale for it I decided to just do a little research online to doublecheck my explanation. Imagine my horror when I found that not only were my thoughts on sleep wrong, they were so out of date there wasn't even any reference to them online anymore! So I changed that bit to gloss over why she sleeps. Determined not to make a similar mistake with Marcus' sociopathy I spent a couple of hours today researching the topic. I'm relieved to see I still have a reasonably good understanding of it. Let's hope that translates into an interesting tale.

Yeah! Curse David. I told him not to interrupt the juicy bits, but you know these blasted characters. I'm only the writer. :)