chapter 10

[miriam_e]

The latest part of my Selena City story about Adele, a lesbian in a near future where sexuality is not an issue.

Warning for those who are uncomfortable with sexuality. Today's chapter gets just a tiny bit steamy.

part 10 Remember (2039 words)

Took me a while. Sorry folks. I think I'm back into it now. This chapter was going to be more about Brenda teaching at school, but I had problems bridging into it so I moved up something that was originally going to happen later. Hope it works okay.

Let me know what you think of it.

Comments

[rpeate.livejournal.com]

It's a very good story, well written and engaging. But I had to laugh at this: "I had a great upswelling of affection." I suggest a more colloquial phrasing. :) Sometimes your literary voice sounds Vulcan. :)

[miriam-e.livejournal.com]

It may be that you are correct. I shall have to cogitate upon this further before I reply in the affirmative or the negative... Captain.
[arches eyebrow]

:D

And thanks for the comments. I appreciate it.

[rpeate.livejournal.com]

Thank you for bringing the lesbian perspective to me. From what I'm gathering, we feel exactly the same about women, you just happen to be one.