chapter 12

[miriam_e]

The latest part of my Selena City story about Adele, a lesbian in a near future where sexuality is not an issue.

part 12 Checking (3282 words)

Wow! Looks like I've found out how to keep my word count up: just have my internet computer's hard drive self-destruct. My own fault really. I should have moved all that machine's data to a newer drive long ago. They only last several years. It's a good thing I have different computers for different purposes, but I've lost all my email for the last few months. [groan] Thank heavens for Puppy Linux, because it lets me boot my machine without my boot hard drive.

So, anyway... today's chapter... I'm not sure it works very well. Once again I'm too close to it to be able to see it. I'm sure it could be written much better, but that'll have to wait till December for the editing.

Let me know what you think of it.

Comments

[annie-lyne.livejournal.com]

hee! awesome.

I don't know if it's that I'm tired or not, but the beginning starts off a little rough, but the rest is fine.

[miriam-e.livejournal.com]

Ah. Yes. I just re-read the beginning, and you're right. It reads more like notes. I'll have to rewrite that later (probably in December) to play out in more detail.

Thanks for that. I appreciate it.

Glad you enjoyed it. This one scares me a bit because I completely lost sight of what I was writing and had to just hope that it wasn't too awful. Basically I would just elaborate on my notes and then my characters would just take off and pull me along for the ride. Scary.