chapter 15

[miriam_e]

The latest part of my Selena City story about Adele, a lesbian in a near future where sexuality is not an issue.

Okay. It finally happens. :D

If offended by lesbian sex do not read this chapter.

part 15 Lessons (3869 words)

Finally got this one done. Been working on it all day. It was unbelieveably difficult to write, not because of challenging subject matter, but because it is plain embarrassing, knowing it was going to be displayed in public and read by people who I know. (Hi Mum. Hi Dad. :)

Took forever to write the beginning of the sex sequence and I was despairing of ever getting it done, when the characters lost their patience with me, took over and wrote it themselves, much to my relief.

Ummm... I should mention that I have posted without being able to make sense of what I'm reading anymore. I'm tired and can no longer see it, so I'm warning you that it might be utter crap. Please let me know of any glaring faults.

Hope everybody enjoys it. Let me know what you think.

Comments

[soul-searcher-4.livejournal.com]

aww, that was great- very tastefully done, and the way you described everything so poetically (if thats the word im looking for ? :P)

i love the sound of the school =3 very cute- and the whole thing adele was feeling, was a great character development, kinda thing :)

looking forward to reading more :)
xox

[miriam-e.livejournal.com]

:) heheheh Thanks.

[miriam-e.livejournal.com]

The school was influenced by some books I'd read by the animal conservationist and zoo owner, Gerald Durrell, of his childhood, where instead of going to a normal school he had a tutor. It always seemed to me a remarkably sensible way to educate kids and bring out their abilities. Also, it bugs me that since we have had formal schools we have consistently under-valued the way teachers work hard to mould the next society and have been buried under impractically large class sizes and rigid curricula.

We need to reduce the work load on them, make the profession a joy to be a part of, and shrink class sizes so they can truly help all the kids. Not only the teacher, but the pupils will benefit, and as a result, our society.

[soul-searcher-4.livejournal.com]

i completely agree! class sizes are rediculous- and everyone would benifit if they were smaller... teachers would enjoy there jobs more to start... there are less and less teachers these days- because its just not a profession that is enjoyed anymore- they are so unappreciated...

well, it was lovely anyway :) i love that you get your ideas from real, researchable places :)

xox