chapter 15

[miriam_e]

The latest part of my Selena City story about Adele, a lesbian in a near future where sexuality is not an issue.

Okay. It finally happens. :D

If offended by lesbian sex do not read this chapter.

part 15 Lessons (3869 words)

Finally got this one done. Been working on it all day. It was unbelieveably difficult to write, not because of challenging subject matter, but because it is plain embarrassing, knowing it was going to be displayed in public and read by people who I know. (Hi Mum. Hi Dad. :)

Took forever to write the beginning of the sex sequence and I was despairing of ever getting it done, when the characters lost their patience with me, took over and wrote it themselves, much to my relief.

Ummm... I should mention that I have posted without being able to make sense of what I'm reading anymore. I'm tired and can no longer see it, so I'm warning you that it might be utter crap. Please let me know of any glaring faults.

Hope everybody enjoys it. Let me know what you think.

Comments

[miriam-e.livejournal.com]

:D heheheh
Yes, I re-read it this morning and was relieved that instead of finding a mess of worthless writing it actually got me a little hot. :)

But I also noticed the sex scene went far too quickly. It needed to be slower, more languid, more sensual and emotional.

[annie-lyne.livejournal.com]

I didn't get to read it in *too* much detail because I had to go to work. But it could work okay a bit faster now, and have a more involved... err session... later ;)