chapter 16

[miriam_e]

The latest part of my Selena City story about Adele, a lesbian in a near future where sexuality is not an issue.

part 16 Invincible (3079 words)

Not as much written as I intended. I wanted to move right on to the next part, but I'm so tired I can hardly see straight, so it'll have to be in tomorrow's effort.

Once again I'm not sure how this reads. I tried re-reading it, but I can't. All the words look wrong. Gah! I'll be so glad when this infection is completely gone and I have my brains back. :)

Let me know what you think.

Comments

[soul-searcher-4.livejournal.com]

aww, no it was a great chapter =D hehe, its cool your rents are reading this too :P i hardly ever let my rents read stuff ive written... im not sure why though...

mm teaaa... well good luck with the re-reading and new writing =) i cant believe its the end of november! its snuck up so fast!!! wheres it all gone?! :S

only two or three? aww, its gonna be all over before i know it :( eek! hehe- well waht ever you decide- i cant wait to read it =)

best of luck! cant wait! (really cant :P) look forward to the next part... i know i always say that huh... lol... =) haoppy writing!

xox

[miriam-e.livejournal.com]

:) Oh there's still the rewrites to come. :/
That could see entire other chapters added, significant material added inside chapters, and perhaps stuff chopped.

Thanks for the encouragement. :)