chapter 16

Nov. 29th, 2007 11:39 pm
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The latest part of my Selena City story about Adele, a lesbian in a near future where sexuality is not an issue.

part 16 Invincible (3079 words)

Not as much written as I intended. I wanted to move right on to the next part, but I'm so tired I can hardly see straight, so it'll have to be in tomorrow's effort.

Once again I'm not sure how this reads. I tried re-reading it, but I can't. All the words look wrong. Gah! I'll be so glad when this infection is completely gone and I have my brains back. :)

Let me know what you think.

Date: 2007-11-30 07:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clubhopper15.livejournal.com
When I am in the mood for literary criticism I will delve deeper into this but..I love you(r writing)!

Date: 2007-12-01 02:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miriam-e.livejournal.com
:) Cool. Thanks.
heheheh

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