Tired again.
This is only a short chapter. It took me a surprising amount of research to work this one out. I didn't want to mouth off a load of crap about stuff I didn't know. It meant I dismissed some of my original ideas. Even so, the result is still astonishingly close to my original notes.
I don't know if this chapter works well. I'd originally intended to include this at the end of the previous chapter, but I overlooked this bit of my notes and didn't realise it til this morning. Damn. Once again I'm so tired I haven't much idea about whether this chapter works or not. (I have a feeling it doesn't.)
Anyway, hope it isn't too bad:
http://miriam-english.org/stories/prescription/
Let me know... :)
This is only a short chapter. It took me a surprising amount of research to work this one out. I didn't want to mouth off a load of crap about stuff I didn't know. It meant I dismissed some of my original ideas. Even so, the result is still astonishingly close to my original notes.
I don't know if this chapter works well. I'd originally intended to include this at the end of the previous chapter, but I overlooked this bit of my notes and didn't realise it til this morning. Damn. Once again I'm so tired I haven't much idea about whether this chapter works or not. (I have a feeling it doesn't.)
Anyway, hope it isn't too bad:
http://miriam-english.org/stories/prescription/
Let me know... :)