chapter 12 - secrets
Saturday, 20 November 2010 03:33 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
miriam_eI should have posted this earlier, but wanted to add quite a bit more. Unfortunately about 9pm I became terribly tired and thought I'd sneak about 20 minutes' nap... then woke at 3am. I'll add the rest in the next chapter, which really suited it more anyway.
I still have difficulty seeing what I wrote, but a have a better feeling about this one. The structure of this chapter is better, I think, because I took extra care with it after the dialogue-rich previous ones. The topic isn't nice, but there isn't anything I can do about that. It is what it has to be.
As usual:
http://miriam-english.org/stories/prescription/
Hope it interests you. Let me know what you think.
I'm going back to bed now so I can continue the story with the next chapter bright and early.
I still have difficulty seeing what I wrote, but a have a better feeling about this one. The structure of this chapter is better, I think, because I took extra care with it after the dialogue-rich previous ones. The topic isn't nice, but there isn't anything I can do about that. It is what it has to be.
As usual:
http://miriam-english.org/stories/prescription/
Hope it interests you. Let me know what you think.
I'm going back to bed now so I can continue the story with the next chapter bright and early.