chapter 7 is online! Yay!

Chapter 7, titled "penultimatum" is now online.
http://miriam-english.org/stories/flying/

See what you think. The basic skeleton is what I have in my notes, but I had considerable trouble getting my character, Christine, to follow the script. A phone call to my Mum solved the problem. She helped me realise how I could change circumstances slightly so that Christine would do what I want. She is so damn indecisive! -- Christine, not my Mum. :)

I hope you enjoy.

Chapter 8 will be up soon, I hope.